Four or More!

After a week-long hiccup to do some business in Burbank, I'm back pumping out the Love and Capes pages. Here's page four, which means I've only got twenty left to go! It's going to need to be a page every three days to hit my deadline. I think I can do it, but once again it will be a little tighter than I'd like.

Sigh. At least I'm consistent.

This page was tough to break from a writing standpoint. I had a joke which I really liked, but as written, it would break the flow of the story. I wound up swapping Mark for Charlotte, and the whole scene works better now. Not only does the funny still work, but it creates a better transition for the story and, of course, the next page.